City of Women
by Supreme Goddess Lorena
Daniel awoke to his radio alarm clock which startled him with a loud and aggressive feminist speech. He groaned, rolled over, and with one hand he slammed the button off before the woman on the radio could finish her sentence. I always hated that station, he grumbled to himself. Thinking that his wife must have left it on that station, he looked over at her where she lay beside him and still sleeping despite the loud interruption. She had one of her legs uncovered, to expose a long slender thigh and calf. Her wavy blonde hair lay in a tangled mess over her cheek, covering her attractive facial features. For a slight fraction of a second, Daniel felt the resurfacing of an old urge to grab her, fondle her breasts until she woke up, and then mount her. He would fuck her until he came then he would get up to go shower quickly before high-tailing it to the office. Then he realized what he was thinking. A disappointed and sinking feeling came over him and he stuffed his yearning back inside of him to that deep and dark place where he stored all of his regrets then he rolled out of bed. He took his mind off of it by going over today's workload in his mind. He was weeks behind schedule. He turned on the shower, ran his fingers through his thick brown hair, then he went through the rest of his morning procedures roboticly.
Jill heard the shower running and knew it was safe to open
her eyes now. The last thing she wanted was to face Daniel this
morning. They had argued again last night just as they always
did most every night. She had brought up the same old argument
again about how she needed to get away with him for a romantic
couple's holiday. They have been married for seven years now and
Daniel had not taken her anywhere since their honeymoon, a honeymoon
that got cut short because he had a new project at work that he
had to get back to in time. Since then he had never found a convenient
time to take time off of work. He was dedicated to his job more
than any man she had ever met. It is what she had liked about
him when they had first met but she had no idea at the time that
her needs and interests would interfere with his goals. She felt
like he had become like her father, a highly recognized and devoted
businessman but also an unemotional, distant, and absent husband.
The water in the bathroom turned off and Daniel came back into the bedroom to get dressed so Jill closed her eyes and tried to fall back asleep.
A few minutes later, Daniel headed down the stairs to the kitchen. He opened the fridge and rummaged through the shelves hoping to find something for a quick breakfast. Why the hell can't she come down and fix me something like she used to, like a good little wife should?!, he thought feeling frustrated.
"Damn!", he cursed outloud as he grabbed the last remaining banana.
Screw her!, he thought. She can just get off her lazy ass and
go buy some more if she bloody well wants one! He took the banana
with him and he headed out the front door. He purposely slammed
it, knowing that she was already awake, just as she was most mornings
when he got ready for work. But why screw up a good thing?, he
thought. If I let on that I know she is up then she would just
want to go over what we argued about the night before, he thought
as he opened the driver's side door to his blue mercedes. He threw
in his briefcase and cellular phone, climbed in, started the engine,
then pulled out of the driveway. He avoided looking up at the
bedroom window. He didn't feel like waving goodbye to her and
even more so didn't want to catch her smiling down at him, knowing
that he would then have to force one back at her. As he sped off
down the street he leaned over and grabbed his cellular phone
from off of the passenger seat and he started to dial Suzie's
Suzie was a twenty-three year old blonde that he kept in a downtown apartment. They had met at a company party. Jill had been in the living room talking with the other wives as she usually did at such functions and he had been in the den with the other men when he got the urge to use the bathroom. Suzie had been standing in line when he had approached the home's one and only bathroom. They flirted back and forth until the bathroom became free and all of a sudden Suzie offered to share the bathroom with him since they both couldn't hold it any longer. From there their relationship grew. He saw Suzie three to four times a week on his lunch hours, getting a blowjob or a fuck for lunch then he would head back to work, most often late and still hungry for food. He felt that she was everything that Jill used to be. Sexually adventurous and willing to please. Everything a man dreamed of. Why should I always have to worry about whether she's coming or not and whether I'm doing it the 'right way'?, he thought. Sex should be more simple. Women should be more simple, he added. It would make my life alot easier.
Daniel woke Suzie up and discussed the time of their next rendezvous as his mercedes ripped through the quiet streets, sending fall leaves flying behind him as he sped off to work with the steering wheel in one hand and Suzie on the phone in his other hand. It's going to be a good day, he thought, smiling to himself.
Daniel walked into the travel agent's office and told his agent
that he wanted two tickets to Cancun, Mexico. He always used the
same agent. She was discreet with all of his hidden travels but
most of all, she was cute. Everytime he and Suzie took a 'business'
trip together, his travel agent took care of everything. The last
thing he needed right now was a divorce. Jill would take everything
that he had worked hard for, he thought. His home. His car. Everything.
He left the travel agency with a smile on his face. Jill knew
he was leaving today for a business trip today. They had argued
all last night over why she wasn't able to come with him. Daniel
insisted he would take her next time, explaining that this time
it was an important project and he couldn't fuck it up by taking
along a clingy, nagging wife. Boy I'm good, he thought smugly.
I've got it all! A wife to care for my home, a great lay on the
side whenever I want it, a great job, a nice car to attract the
babes, and a large well-hidden bank account just far enough out
of the wife's reach. Why share what I've worked so hard for, he
grumbled. All Jill ever did was quit college to marry me then
she only gave me seven years of whining and complaining!
He walked around the corner of the building and he took the alley back to where he had parked his car. He had parked it far away from the travel agent's office in fear that Jill might show up.
He heard a car's tires turn the corner and come towards him down the alley from behind him. He quickly moved over to the right side of the alley to give it room to pass. It was an old alley with cobblestones for a road. There wasn't much room so Daniel inched between two garbage cans. He could hear the vehicle slow down to a crawl as it got closer to him. Why aren't they passing damn it!, he fumed. He turned around to see what was taking it so long to pass and saw that it was a dark green van.
All of a sudden the van stopped and three large men jumped out of it. They came right for him. Daniel was totally taken off guard but then he started to fight them off. It didn't seem to put them off much. All of them they just lifted him right off of the ground, carried him to the van, slid the side door open, and threw him inside.
"What the fuck is going on?! Who the hell are...", Daniel shouted at them but then instantly blackness came over him as one of the men in the green coveralls had hit Daniel from behind with something hard.
The van drove down the alley then it turned down the main street. It was still early in the morning and there wasn't a person in sight.
There was a sharp pain at the back of Daniel's head. It took awhile for him to realize what had happened. Then he remembered. His body wanted to spring into action but his mind wouldn't let him. He felt groggy and a wave of dizziness hit him. He fell unconscious again.
What might have been seconds could well have been hours. He
managed to stay awake longer this time. He didn't feel as dizzy
but sadly, with the dizziness gone, he now felt more of the pain
at the back of his head. He cringed in angony. He went to reach
for his head but then he found that he couldn't. He had been tied
as well as blindfolded. What the hell do they want with me?!,
he thought frustrated. I'm nobody! Shit, I don't even have my
own office, let alone ransom money! Unless they know about the
hidden account?, he thought with surprise. Or, maybe I've pissed
somebody off? No, he thought, they would have killed me by now
if that was the case. He wanted to get a good look at them but
couldn't because of the blindfold. I wonder if it's still daytime
or not, he thought to himself. Suddenly he heard voices. He lay
perfectly still and he peeled his ears for any noise at all. So
far it was the first thing he had heard at all since he had come
"Where is he?!", a woman demanded to know.
A woman!, Daniel thought.
"He's in the cargo compartment, maam.", a male voice answered her.
Cargo? I'm on a plane?, Daniel thought with amazement. He decided to reanalyze his situation now. He realized things were going to be a little more difficult to get out of now than he had hoped. He was tied up, blindfolded, gagged, still a bit dizzy, had a throbbing pain in his head, and he seemed to be stuck on a plane heading to who knows where and for what reason! Shit!, he cursed to himself. He heard footsteps. They became louder and closer to where he was. Then they stopped. The sound of a door opening caught his attention.
"What the hell is he doing conscious?! Didn't I tell you three to keep him sedated?!"
"Yes maam. I'm sorry. We'll take care of it right away.", one of the men replied.
Daniel thought the man was being overly courteous to her. Who
the heck is she and why would a woman be kidnapping me?, he asked
himself. Why do these men work under her like a pack of obedient
dogs? Well, I'm not going to let them sedate me again, that's
for damn sure! Several pairs of footsteps came towards him then
all of a sudden arms grabbed him. Daniel muffled threats at them
but to no great success. The gag was tied too tight around his
head and so were the ropes that were tied around his wrists and
ankles. He tried to kick and wiggle his way out of the tight bindings
but it only made the rope cut into his skin more and the men simply
held onto him tighter.
"This is going to hurt.", one man sneered at him.
A sharp pain went into his arm so he tried to pull away from it but the needle had already poked into his arm. As unconsciousness took him again he could now hear the sound of the plane's engine through the open doorway. The plane tilted downwards and lowered itself towards the earth as Daniel lowered into unconsciousness unwillingly.
Daniel awoke to find himself in a cool dark place. He was surprised
to find that they had removed his gag and blindfold. He looked
around him and saw that he was now in a jail cell. It wasn't an
ordinary cell. It looked extremely old like something out of a
history book. It was all made of stone and wood with straw on
the dirt floor. Torches hung along one wall just outside of the
cell but far out of his reach. There were many cells but he could
see that strangely enough there were no other prisoners besides
himself. Not even a prison guard was around. Daniel decided this
would be the time to escape. Then he looked down at himself and
became disappointed with his plan. He was stark naked and was
chained. His ropes had been removed in exchange for big, heavy,
thick chains and on his ankles and wrists were wide bands of steel
that looked to have been welded closed. Each band had a link on
it and attached to each link was a long chain. The long chains
kept his arms and legs attached then it ran along the dirt floor
over to the far stone wall of the cell where it sank deep inside
the stone. What the hell, he thought. What have I got to lose?
It's now or never.
He got up but found that it wasn't as easy as it looked. The chains were heavy like lead. He felt that it weighed almost as much as an extra person as he slowly dragged it with him across the straw and dirt until he got closer to the wall where the chain had been sunk into it. He drew in a deep breath, grabbed hold of the chain, then yanked at it with all of his strength. The bands around his wrists dug into his wrist bones and spread an extreme amount of pain throughout his lower arms. It had been done in vain. The stone wall didn't even crack. He wanted to get out of the chains so that he could then tackle the cell door next. He looked over at the door. The wood was thick and it looked like it would require a chainsaw to get through it. He looked down at his now swelling wrists and sighed. How did I get myself into this?, he thought. Won't someone wonder where I am? Then he reached a horrifying conclusion. Everyone knew he was supposed to be going to Mexico today. Is it still today?, he thought. Would Jill know that he never got to the airport? What about Suzie? Would she wonder why he hadn't picked her up, or would she think that he had changed his mind and decided to take Jill this time like he and Suzie had recently argued about? Geez, what if no one figures out that I've been kidnapped?!, he thought, growing more worried now. He sat down on the dirty floor of the prison cell and started to give up all hope.
Then he heard noises. There was shouting and it sounded like it was either outside or far away. Daniel listened closely and noticed that it sounded like joyful shouting. Like that of a celebration. It grew louder and louder until it sounded like it was just outside of where he was. He thought it sounded mostly like women but he could also hear the occasional voice or shout of a man. He heard a door open and the shouts became more loud and clear. Light shone into his cell from the direction of the noise. Two men, who to Daniel looked like two large gorillas wearing short brown tunics and brown leather sandals, entered the prison and they stomped their way over to his cell.
"It is time. Rise.", commanded one of the tall muscular men.
"Who are you and what am I doing here?!", Daniel demanded to know.
"Silence!", the other large man barked at Daniel.
The man then reached for the large padlock on his cell door and
with a large key on the key ring that he held, he opened the padlock
and then threw open the cell door.
Daniel stepped back not knowing what to expect.
"Be still. I'm going to remove one of your chains. You do as I say. Stand still, quiet, and obedient!", the other man said to him.
Obedient?, Daniel thought. Who the hell are these guys? But he decided that since they were slightly bigger than him and since he was a little tied up at the moment that he would allow them to get him loose. One man held him tightly while the other used a large pairs of pliers to pry open one of the chain links. Next he pulled the long chain out and away from him. When they were done Daniel found that he was no longer attached to the wall but that he was still bound by the chains that connected the metal bands at his ankles and wrists. Still hoping they would do more, he looked up at them and waited. But it didn't happen.
"Bring forth the slave!", a woman's voice yelled down at them through a trap door in the ceiling.
Slave? Who was she referring to? Me?, Daniel asked himself in shock. Who the hell are they kidding? I've got to get out of here! Just as he finished thinking that the two large men threw him down on the dirt floor then they grabbed him by his chained feet and started to drag him out of the cell. Daniel yelled out in pain, cursing them all the way out of the cell, across the floor of the prison, and down it's long hall. He couldn't focus on where they were dragging him because the pain kept him too preoccupied. The metal bands on his ankles were being pulled and were now digging into his flesh. His back was getting badly bruised from the dirt floor that Daniel now realized had stone underneath. The straw was getting caught up in his hair but not enough to prevent the stone floor from banging the back of his head. He felt like an animal. It was humiliating being dragged around by his feet and getting coated in dirt. The guards didn't seem to mind what Daniel was going through. They proceeded to drag him to the end of the hall and then up a ramp towards the trap door and out of the prison below.
Light shone into Daniel's eyes as he lay helplessly on his back. He was pulled up the ramp uphill until he felt like he was almost upside down. It then levelled out onto a large stage. Loud cheers rang out from a large crowd of people standing near the high stage. He tried to get a look at who they were but the light shone into his eyes still, blinding him temporarily. The guards lifted him up to his feet and all the people suddenly burst out laughing. It took a moment for Daniel to figure out what they were all laughing about. He then looked down at himself and he soon realized why. He was completely covered in dirt and straw. He was also banged up pretty badly but they didn't seem to care.
He noticed that most of them were women. They looked different though. They all wore strange clothing as if they were stuck in the past. Some of the women pointed at him and laughed while others looked at him in great interest as if they wanted to prod him and inspect him. He tried to back up but the guards held him firmly by his arms. While the women continued to look him over with their eyes, Daniel looked around him to get an idea of where he might be. It was impossible to tell. All he could see was that he stood on a stage that seemed to be in the middle of a large courtyard or arena. Across from the stage at the far end of the arena there was a row of clay or stone houses. Along the left and right side were very high stone walls. Daniel decided it must be some sort of a small confined city.
"How much would you like to offer the Queen for this lovely piece of merchandise?", a barbaric and amazonian looking woman bellowed out to the loud crowd.
Shit, I'm being sold!, Daniel thought to himself. What makes them think they can kidnap people and just sell them off like animals?! A loud murmur went through the crowd as women decided on their purchase price.
"100 goddess-notes", a blonde woman dressed in yellow
What the heck are goddess-notes?, Daniel asked himself.
"300 goddess-notes!", yelled a brunette in red from another area of the crowd.
Hey not bad, he thought, I'm going up in value. I must be a
good catch. He looked over at the dark haired woman and looked
her over more closely. He couldn't believe what he saw. She had
two men with her on either side of her but they were on their
knees and were each wearing a large, wide, metal collar around
their necks. The woman had a hold on their collars with both of
her hands. The men looked scared and they were covered in dirt
and straw just as he was. She must have bought them too!, he thought
with surprise. So that's why all the other cells were empty!
"1000!", someone yelled from far in the back of the large crowd.
The crowd awed over the last offer, being shocked by the offered amount. Then a man walked onto the stage from the other end of it and he whispered into the ear of another guard. The guard hearing the information then approached the redheaded amazonian auctioneer. He bowed to her then he whispered in her ear. Daniel watched as a grin spread across her face. She then nodded to the guard, sent him away, then she turned back to the crowd.
"This slave is spoken for. The Queen wishes to reserve this final slave for herself!", she shouted to the people.
Cheers and applause rang out loudly from the crowd. Some applauded in the direction of somewhere high up behind him. Daniel turned to look to where they were shouting their praise. He was surprised to see that a very high square stone tower stood behind him. He saw that there was a small window high up in the tower over looking the stage of the arena but he could not see anyone looking out of it. He would not be able to see his buyer just yet.
Daniel was taken back to the prison, much to his disappointment. Why the fuck am I here?!, he again asked himself. He rolled it over in his mind several times throughout the night but he could not find the answer. He thought about people who he worked with who might want him gone but he couldn't narrow it down to less than ten people. Sure, he thought, most of them could easily want him to drop off the face of the earth for something he might have done to them to get himself ahead, but would any of them actually go to such a length as this? He thought of Jill and Suzie next. Ok, maybe they might possibly have found out about each other by now without letting him know, though he had pretty well convinced Suzie that Jill was only a friend and not his wife. But what if one of them had found out about the other? They wouldn't do something this wierd!, he told himself. He knew Jill well enough to know that she would never have thought up something like this. She wouldn't even watch porn with him, he thought. So who the hell then? Suzie? Nah, she couldn't live without me. There's no way she'd sell me off like this! Of course, she'd buy me if she could, he snorted outloud at the thought.
Daniel let his mind run rampid all night. It was the only way
he could entertain himself since there was no one else put into
the prison tonight. His stomach growled and the noise startled
him until he realized what it was. He noticed they hadn't bothered
to feed him at all and the only meal he had today was the one
banana he had this morning. It must be dark by now, he thought.
Other than the torch burning on the wall across the hall from
his cell door there was no other source of night.
Sleep finally overcame him. It had been a long and eventful day.
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These last days i was able to read Your book "Femaria, City of Women" and i am deeply impressed by it. Never in my life i read such an exciting novel. Once i started reading i could not stop. The book is composed in a brilliant psychological way to the climax at the end. And i was so delighted to recognize in the content of the book so many ideas i read earlier on Your Goddess Website.
As a man i can only say that reading the story about Daniel, made me envy him. i suppose that every man trained in the way as Daniel was trained in Femaria, will become obedient and devoted to Women. i sincerely hope that some day in the next future this novel will become a world bestseller. In my opinion this novel is a 'must' for men with submissive feelings, whether these feelings are strong or light.
i want to thank You for writing this excellent book and i want to honour You as the Queen of Femaria. It gave me so much real pleasure to read Your story. You are a Superior Woman who deserves all possible honour! In my thoughts i bow very humble before Your feet and i will never stop to worship You with all my love and devotion.
It is hard for me to write what I am feeling about this most wonderful book. It has touched me, as well as taught me. Goddess Lorena has put into words what She believes in, the life She lives, as well as Her heart. She has been most gracious in Her writing of Femaria, for She shares herself with the reader. At first, I thought the book was simply a way to teach a slave how to be a slave, or teach the Woman reader how She might teach Her slave. As I read, chapter after chapter, I realized that the story was actually teaching me much more than how to be a good slave and the rules of slave hood, it taught me who Goddess Lorena is, and the kind of Goddess She is. She thoughtfully included Herself into one of the key characters, and allowed the reader a delightful insight into who this wonderful and Superior Woman, Goddess Lorena, is. For me, I now am much more aware of my Goddesss personality and dreams, developing and even stronger desire to please Her and serve Her.
The book also gave me the knowledge and tools to know how to fulfill this desire. She clearly illustrates throughout the story-line, all of the proper etiquette and characteristics that must be practiced in order to please a Goddess/Mistress/Women as She truly deserves. Slaves duties and what is expected, and forbidden, is incorporated into a story of a slave, and a Queen he learns to serve well, and all the events that take him from a selfish uncaring male who womanizes and is disrespectful to Women, to a well behaved obedient slave that now adores his Queen and serves Her because he wants to please Her.
Goddess Lorena, all I can say is thank You for allowing me the opportunity to read Your book, and to learn to serve You as Your deserve, as a true Goddess.
Thank You Goddess Lorena
The story starts off quite interestingly with a businessman who was treating the Women in his life very badly. his life changes abruptly when he is kidnapped and made a slave of the Queen. he learned to change his life and attitude towards Women.. During his training period he was humiliated, depersonalized, whipped, and spanked by the Women of Femaria. At first, he did not accept what we call "Female Supremacy" to take over him. But gradually his submissive nature took over and eventually his feelings towards Women changed. he wanted to serve all beautiful Women.
In the other part of the world, besides
the City of Femaria, Women do not have choices, which is why theyre
forced to be subservient. But in the city of Women, all the Women
had choices. They enjoyed their freedom by having the men do all
their chores. They were Authority. They were above the men. Men
were told by their Mistress, Goddess, or Queen to obey, serve,
and worship them or face harsh punishment. men were their objects.
Goddess Lorena , who we also know as Queen of Femaria, is the
author of this book. She has a clear vision as to where she wants
us to go. I cannot wait to read the rest of the chapters. It is
exciting, well written, and it keeps you in suspense.
My thoughts on chapter one to five:
The Book Femaria opened very Excitingly.
I find the first few chapters compelling reading. the story so
far is so real and original, it is strange land where the Supreme
women rule with a rod of iron. i look forward to reading and studying
the next five chapters.
The book is captivating and extremely addictive and i found myself anxiously awaiting permission to continue to the next five chapters. i believe it to be an accurate depiction of a better world that would exist if women were in charge, and men were relegated to worker bees. Peace would exist, crime would be greatly decreased, and all disputes would be minimized.
i would love to see Your book made into a movie. i believe it would be a huge success, and would get the message out there. You, my Queen, would have to play the Queen's role and would have to choose a cast that met Your vision. It would be superb.
i love the story. It is well written and holds my attention. A real page turner. i like how the characters are developing. The ...... is still mysterious. But, We/we are getting to know the Women of Femaria much better. Each is a unique character. i also like daniel. he seems basically to be a good man, who is struggling to learn the ways of Femaria. Since in the real world he was assertive, he is in conflict with his own hidden desires to serve Women. As the story progresses these desires come
more to the surface.
As the story progresses, i am learning
more about what the daily life of a slave entails. At present,
daniel hasn't been properly trained in ......., so i am interested
in the information contained in that part of the story. I feel
that it must be nice to live in Femaria. It seems to be a better
life then most people have in the real world. Of course, in the
story, daniel seems to have been on the top of the economic ladder
before his kidnapping. If he were further down on the bottom,
he would propably be less likely to want to escape.
The book ended nicely. i thoughly enjoyed all the characters. The ........ scene at the end was hot to say the least. The story didn't really leave any loose ends that needed tying up.
i like that ..... clears up some of the mystery surrounding Femaria at the end. But, is there room for a sequel? i hope so.
This Ph.D gives Femaria an A+.
i LOVE YOUR BOOK sooo much. It is the ultimate , it is awesome!!!! All my life i have believed in FEMALE SUPREMECY. i have read alot,i do mean alot of things about it. But YOUR book just blows them all away. And i havent
even read but five chapters yet. YOU are a great writer. The story keeps you up on your seat,and makes you not want to put it down. YOU are "THE ULTIMATE WRITER" "GODDESS LORENA"
i started reading the first five chapters of Your book, 'FEMARIA, CITY OF WOMEN' , and found myself totally captivated by it and not wanting to stop reading. It is a wonderfully educational and instuctional book, while at the same time being very enjoyable and entertaining reading; a real work of art. The way You so eloquently demonstrate, that for the male, the path for
true happiness and finding fulfillment in his own self worth, lies in his unconditional surrender and enslavement to Women. Definitely a "must have" book, for all Your slaves.
i found it very inspiring, following
Your subject character, daniel, as he is transformed, from a stupid,
selfish, self-centered and self serving, chauvanist male, to one
who begins to see the errors in his ways, without realizing it.
Through very effective use of the "carrot and the whip"
approach, just as One would train a dog, changes start happening
to daniel, as his Mistress implements Her re-education program.
By the end of chapter five, the effectiveness of daniel's behavioral
modification is aptly
demonstrated, by the remorse he feels, when his Trainer...............................(storyline edited out). The change is happening very subtely; daniel starts recognizing his true place under Women, without being aware of it.
Goddess, Your book has left me in total awe and appreciative of the wisdom, thoroughness and intelligence of Your slave training program. i am a very fortunate slave, to have You, as my Goddess.
after reading the first ten chapters, i was amazed at how deeply, You had affected me, in my desire to want to please and serve You; to become a better slave for You. As i followed daniel's experiences on his journey into complete capitulation to the Women of Femaria, with each of his resistances neutralized and stripped away from him; the greater became my desire to be Your slave.
It was fascinating, watching daniel's
gradual trasformation, from a hardcore male chauvanist in Chapter
One, to seeing his reluctance to leave the (storyline
edited out) ......., where his Queen
.........., as he ........... like a pet dog. To the way, in Chapter
Seven, he makes himself .......... in honour of the captivating
Women of Femaria and ......., thinking about how ........ humiliated
and beat him, and how he had kissed ........... To his reaction,
in Chapter Ten, when he ...........
With every chapter, daniel, is subtely being molded and transformed into a slave, totally dedicated to Female Supremacy. Goddess, You take a typical male chauvanist and in a very deliberate and methodical process, break him into slavery. You seem to understand the male psyche, so perfectly. You know which strings to pull, which buttons to press, making him perform like a trained circus animal. his only desire being to please and obey, You. It is the perfect slave training manual. A book no Woman or slave should be without. Goddess, it is a real tribute to Your genius.
Dearest Goddess Lorena, Boss of Goddess club and Queen of Femaria,
i wish to thank You again for allowing
me to read Your wonderous book, Femaria, City of Women.
i seldom take the time to read entire books, but in this case
i found i could not put it down. from the very beginning i found
myself mesmerized, being drawn into the very story. at first i
did not identify very well with daniel, but as he learnt to accept
his new place in life i began to feel his pain, his saddness,
his pride and soon wished i could change places with him. as i
reached the second half of the
book, i felt i was living in Femaria, constantly in admiration of the cities beauty and in awe of the women and Goddesses that live there. i read chapter after chapter, unable to tear myself away from the story. i can now imagine all the emotions felt by a slave, who's only duty is to serve a perfect Goddess, seeing to Her every need. i have felt the sting of the lash for betraying Her, i have learnt that i am only as worthy as She sees me in Her eyes. i now know to whom my body belongs and willing
accept anything Goddess would choose to do with it. now that i have finished reading this wonderful story i am drawn to read it again and again so that i may continue experiencing life in Femaria, City of Women. again, thank You Goddess for allowing me this experience. this is the place i have spent my life searching for. at last, i feel i am home.
Your devoted slave and servant,
My/my Goddess Lorena, Boss of Goddess club and My/my Owner,
I continue to reading Your book and i
find this perfect: i like very much Your style of writing, Your
fantasies are the same of mine, when i read, i feel the same of
Daniel, like if i was there, and really You knows very good the
mind of slaves and what he think and he feel! This is what make
me crazy for You and why i think really You are Goddess: You are
omnipotent when You
know what is in the brain of Your slaves!
I will write soon to Your Highness and, just now i kiss Your feet, if You give me this honour.
Your book femaria, city of women, so far is exciting and stimulating. I can only dream of a place. i would loved to be trapped in a world ran by women, like daniel is. Being in a prison, slave training, and dog training. This book so far has all the great begins of an erotic, sexy, and will written book, Goddess Lorena. You are creative and intervating.
Reading your book has made me realize many things that i have not known before. i learn that most men are ego manics and are only out to please themself. They put women down and think and treat them like object, this is why the world needs places like Femaria.
I also learn that women can control me and that is were the mans place is. Men were put on the world to serve, amuse, and to make sure women are well taken care for.
slave little shit in Oregon
my Queen and Ultimate Goddess:
Reading Femaria, City of Women,
has been very rewarding. Through chapter 10 of the story i am
amazed by how well You drew me into the action. Experiencing Daniel's
predicament through Your words has created a perfect balance between
fear and excitement. Parts of me wished i could be in his place,
serving these incredible Women. At other points of the story i
cringe at what he endures (based on his all to common male behaviour patterns). Lastly, i am truly impressed with Your writing style and how well You depict the male thought process. Daniel's thought processes during his History lessons were classic male and made me want to punish him myself.
Congratulations on Your fabulous book and i can't wait to read the rest.
my Queen and the World's Most Complete Goddess,
Your Masterpiece, "Femaria, City of Women", continues to get better and better as i read my way through it. i continue to be amazed by the depth of Your writing. The details of Daniel's experiences transcend the page and get into the true spirit of the male thought process.
Without giving away any plot details, i find that your writing style is very effective in explaining the thoughts that go through Daniel's mind and motivate his actions. You know me well enough to know that some of my thoughts have mirrored Daniel's during certain passages of the book. i think that any male interested in Your training will enjoy reading about Daniel's story and will identify with different parts of his life.
i compliment Your ability to integrate in so many details about how to serve a Goddess. The details You express throughout the novel on appropriate ways to behave is very educational. i can see why You call it Your training manual! Lastly, i must admit to having one question that i can't wait to find out the answer to: Why is the protagonist of Your story a man? Perhaps it will become evident in the final 10 chapters but for now, everything else about You on Goddess Club screams of Your Brilliance and Superiority so i am surprised that You have put so much effort into explaining the inferior thought processes of a man. Obviously, You prove more then capable of understanding the limited male mind but i continue to be driven to learn more about You and how to please You.
Thank You once again for continuing to share Your Wonderful Self with us lowly slaves through all Your incredible gifts (Goddess Club, email, videos, audio tapes, etc.). Your wisdom and grandeur are spectacular to behold and it is incumbent on all of Your lowly servants to praise You loudly and sincerely.
Goddess Lorena, You are High Above us all and are too Brilliant for us to comprehend properly (but it is our duty to try)!
All Glory and Honor belongs to thee,
Goddess Lorena, Boss of Goddess Club and Queen of Femaria
Your lowly and humbled servant,
Your book is truly fascinating because it eminates from the soul of Your worshipping program. It is written with that pyschological background of Yours and is very elegantly done. i read it feeling that there are a pluthera of messages coming across that apply obedience training to me personally as well as touch my psyche. i feel Your highly dominant nature
throughout to the point of ultimate respect and fear. i feel most submissive knowing that these were thoughts of Yours written down on paper. There is one other element that interests me so, the creative use of Your vivid imagination. Often times i find myself emersed in a range of colors and visual presentations that You delve into. This occurs throughout the manuscript in describing colors, clothing, paint, texture and taste. i worship the CD that You made for me Goddess because it is a part of You for me to embrace.
my final review:
The book on CD, "Femaria, City of Women" captures the imagination of one Woman's dream, a Goddess, to have Her Own society where men are dominatntly used as mere lowly creatures to cater to, serve and worship the Women of this enchanting land, Femaria.
Goddess Lorena describes the plight of
one mans journey from his existence in the real world as an ungrateful,
self-centered husband to his kidnapping to Femaria and through
his many encounters during his first 30 days of inhabitence on
the island. Femaria's allure takes a step back in time where Women
dressed as Goddesses in sheer and shimmerring fabric and the men
dressed as roman slaves in loin cloth.
Daniel quickly finds out that this is no holiday and finds tht he has become a prisoner. Each day he is there he learns to change his old pathetic habits of treating Women to that of showing true submissiveness. Through persistent teaching he progressively learns to give into the ways that a slave should behave. he learns that his life is truely meaningless unless he is serving and catering to the Women's every want and need.
Although he is chose to serve as the
Queen's personal slave, he still finds that any Woman he encounters
deserves the same similar kind of respect and treatment. Being
used as an object and for the Women's selfish sexual needs are
among the ways in which he finds he is able to serve them. he
learns that gratification is only important for the Women and
that all of his wants
and needs are discarded and useless in his new life.
Without giving away anymore of the storyline, i want to also point out that this is excellent reading. The book is a very detailed, highly creative and is a colourfully descriptive adventure that all free men should get a hold of. Once you read this you may find that being a free man isnt so important to you at all.
You will find yourself captured within the text of this book and the pages will seem to fly by even if you are not an avid reader. With the encouragement of Goddess Lorena i was able to read a 30 chapter, several hundred page book with and write overall reviews on each chapter including the lessons that i had learned. It is also important reading if you truly want to know what it takes to serve a Goddess and of what things you will be required to do. It is that leap from fiction of a book to your own reality that make the pages so enticing to consume. This IS a training manual of sorts by Goddess Lorena to learn from. The lessons contained within the text are things a slave should know how to do and perform well at.
It was my distinct pleasure to have been permitted to purchase this book and be allowed to read it. All that was revealed within the pages, coupled with Goddess Lorena's support was rather life changing. In reading this book, i have found it to be a very instructional tool towards my D/s relationship to be able to know how to serve Her properly as Her personal slave. i am a VERY proud slave to have such a fascinating, incredibly sexy and highly intelligent Goddess to serve.
This book is a vision of the future and
She would like to have the support of more men out there to devote
their lives to Her also and to actually create Femaria. The building
of this new society has already begun and is a great opportunity
for all you men out there to join in now at the beginning of something
very special! She will find a place for you as She has for me
and you would become a great assett to Her. With your help, devotion and contributions Femaria will soon exist.
This is a very impressive book written by Goddess Lorena. At first blush, it reminded me of the 'Exit to Eden' movie (which wasn't that great a film compared to this book), and while i have not read the original book to the movie, i was at first making unfair recollections and comparisons to the movie. This is a thoughtful and exceptionally considered account of how a 'normal' male with a well-developed set of boorish values is upstaged and taught a lesson in role reversal that he clearly will never forget. As someone who appreciates history, i very much welcome the importance Goddess Lorena has placed on Her commemorating the ancient Roman and Greek epochs within a Female Supremacy context. Her slices of everyday life creditably captures the normal life of those times centuries ago. Yet this is no stale tale of yesteryear, for it holds some deeply significant lessons for us all to consider today. These lessons underscore how vital it is, for both Females and males, to unswervingly embrace Female Supremacy as a functional and relevant philosophy for all humankind, with benefits for all.
i hope that Goddess Lorena's efforts go from strength to strength as She becomes more prosperous from producing these endeavours. Then it would be easier to have this text appear in a deluxe CD-ROM version complete with detailed index, with a script layout that is consistent with the typeset of fine manuscripts, all within a colourful and highly polished jewel case befitting its contents. Goddess Lorena is fully deserving of every support possible in continuously elevating Her fine work. Maybe Her book also serves as a clarion call to those men who are sympathetic to Her cause to commit themselves to Her aims at creating a world more like Femaria, City of Women. i applaud and support such sentiments.
Daniel thought he was going on just another business trip
but instead he discovers a whole new world that he never even
A world that is ruled by Women.
This book is on CD-Rom. It has 30 chapters and is more than 500 pages long.
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